Chevenga himself

Chevenga himself

Edilson Nascimento

Edilson Nascimento

Guliano Gemma

Guliano Gemma

Luca Argentero

Luca Argentero

Jack Donnelly

Jack Donnelly

Most public sex scene ever: whose point of view should I use?


Dear Ravenous Horde:

Some months ago an anonymous commenter complained that the second instance of Imperator and Imperatrix Chevenga and Niku performing the act of public copulation that Arkan tradition requires on the Diem of Carnal Licentiousness every leap year, covered summarily in asa kraiya Post 062, seemed too mundane and chore-like.

C & N's first Diem of Carnal Licentiousness performance! Whose point of view?

Different pov's early on? (See blogpost; we'll get back to the Fab 5)

Chalk
31% (4 votes)
Charcoal
62% (8 votes)
Maybe, depending on (factor in comment)
0% (0 votes)
Other in comment
8% (1 vote)
Total votes: 13

Other pov's right from the start?


Loyal ravenous horde:

(You're a bit small for a horde. But ravenous.)

I am considering doing rewrites on the first part of PA specifically to add other points of view, starting much earlier than I do currently.

So for instance, there'd be stuff about Niku in childhood, Skorsas in childhood, Intharas earlier on in his career as High Editor, Kaninjer as a med student, etc.

What do you think? Take the poll! And comment below.

Update: more thoughts:

119 - The sooner one accepts truth, the better


1 Sipim, 4980 | Vae Arahi
Dear Mamin:

I have kept you up to date with Chevenga’s emotional healing fairly well, I think. It’s about one significant event per letter at the rate I usually write them, and since I haven’t had much to write about re Kilalulana and me beyond her whining about how boring it is in Vae Arahi and Terera and how awful she feels in the morning when she doesn’t comply with my prescription to eat bread the night before, it’s been easy to keep pace with my employer and patient.

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